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aya by PhandomMom

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I like the anatomy and how you dipicted Aya's figure. I think you should move on to the next step of putting in more detail and have her posing. I see nothing wrong here at all. Hopefully you can try to incorporate a more off white color instead, and try to draw in her mouth, I understand the style of drawing, but maybe trying something new isn't always a bad thing. Other than these hopefully helpful tips, I enjoy seeing your work. Keep it up and don't stop drawing. I would love for you to reply to me and give some feed back if that suits you. Hope I wasn't too harsh I would hate to have hurt your work and feelings rather than help them.
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PhandomMom Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you for the critique but everything you mentioned was a stylistic choice! The picture is supposed to be minimalistic; I kept the amount of details and colors to as few and simple as I could. If by your critique you mean you want me to draw a less stylized Aya I certainly plan on doing so in the future (not to mention I have before on my Tumblr).
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Unsafety-pin Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student General Artist
Awesome, I like this one, but if you do more with crazy cool details, I would love to see it. give me a holla!
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PhandomMom Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Okay I'm kind of getting annoyed with all this. Did you even look at the rest of my gallery? Pretty much every other piece of art that I do is detailed. This is one picture that I wanted to do stylistically, and everyone's entitled to their own opinion, but berating this piece just because it's not something you like is a little silly.
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