I like the anatomy and how you dipicted Aya's figure. I think you should move on to the next step of putting in more detail and have her posing. I see nothing wrong here at all. Hopefully you can try to incorporate a more off white color instead, and try to draw in her mouth, I understand the style of drawing, but maybe trying something new isn't always a bad thing. Other than these hopefully helpful tips, I enjoy seeing your work. Keep it up and don't stop drawing. I would love for you to reply to me and give some feed back if that suits you. Hope I wasn't too harsh I would hate to have hurt your work and feelings rather than help them.
Thank you for the critique but everything you mentioned was a stylistic choice! The picture is supposed to be minimalistic; I kept the amount of details and colors to as few and simple as I could. If by your critique you mean you want me to draw a less stylized Aya I certainly plan on doing so in the future (not to mention I have before on my Tumblr).
Awesome, I like this one, but if you do more with crazy cool details, I would love to see it. give me a holla!
Okay I'm kind of getting annoyed with all this. Did you even look at the rest of my gallery? Pretty much every other piece of art that I do is detailed. This is one picture that I wanted to do stylistically, and everyone's entitled to their own opinion, but berating this piece just because it's not something you like is a little silly.